Sharp Teeth:
I had to put it down. (No dog jokes.)
Let me be plain. I speak out
of ignorance. The only book-length poem
I’d read wasn’t The Odyssey,
or even The Divine Comedy,
but George Keithley’s The Donner Party,
which unlike Sharp Teeth
at least seemed to earn
its form by breaking sentences
into lines less obvious
than syntactical units,
like I’ve done here. I looked
to Barlow’s horror hybrid
for that revealing feeling
I got years back from the opening
of Blade—blood and metaphor—but got
impressionistic notes
for a screenplay. No excuse
for verse. Now
for comfort, I consult
a gently Roethke Keithley interlude:
“Is it a hound halfway
out of hell? Is it you?
Do you suppose he knows
I’m a long dog too?â€
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